Thesis

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  1. MaliciousRelik Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Prick
    Prick on the skin
    Prick on the soul
    Dent in the mind
    And lost in the hole
    Behind our eyes
    A doorway to hell
    A doorway to heaven
    A lost soul
    A mind is its sanctum
    And thy knowledge
    Be lost in their lives
    Forever felt
    Forever forgotten
    Always in the mind
    Always in the soul
    Never to be seen again
    Never to be lost again
    Always found
    Never lost
    Never knowing true relief
    An angel’s thesis
    Carves markings into man
    Their imprint engraved in their skin
    All within a prick of the skin
    A pierce of the mind
    An invasion of the soul
    The burn of the bone
    And the pain of the muscle
    Blood flows like water in a sea
    Emotions run deep and sympathy is lost
    Remorse is no more
    The will to survive counters all
    Nothing lost
    Nothing gained
    All for one day to live
    All for one day to die
    This is my angel’s thesis

    What is yours?

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  2. Roxas OG

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    If it's a poem, it's awesome. Song lyrics, awesome... plain and simple it was really awesome.
     
  3. MaliciousRelik Merlin's Housekeeper

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    That shall be published soon, frmo the many vies it has gotten with ovthers it prolly is both

    ~Malice
     
  4. Sankari Destiny Islands Resident

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    A really cool rhythmic pattern, message, and everything else. It's a very well done poem. Not to mention amazing.
     
  5. MaliciousRelik Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Thank you, I have a few more like Thesis up there ^ PM if you wish to hear it.

    ~Malice
     
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