Through You

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Cleopatra, May 2, 2010.

  1. Cleopatra King's Apprentice

    Mar 9, 2009
    Skyway Avenue <3.
    Unseen things flow through your eyes
    Unspoken words are heard from your teachings
    Unfelt feelings are realized through your touch
    Living your life to the fullest dares people to dream
    Inspiration emerges through those that have your nerve
    A journey of discovery effervesces through your spirit
    You blaze a path not easily followed by those who are faint at heart

    I wrote the poem and if you didn't get the gist of it I have to write a poem explaining the meaning of 'citizenship". I'd like your criticism and comments please. I'm not sure of how to end the poem, or whether I should just leave it as is and I have not title either (so I just labelled it Through You) Whatever advice your have will be much appreciated. ~Thanks.