Together Forever

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I wrote this when I was 14 and it is the first thing I ever wrote, enjoy. Also this is a song not a poem...Gald I just write poems now

    The darkness had come
    But I can see the light so
    Come with me
    We will make it if if we stay together
    And the storm may be strong
    But I know we can make it through together.

    You and me together no one can stop us now
    You and me together no one can hold us back. Oh on!
    You and me forever from now until the end of time.

    When people try to put you down
    And you think no one is there
    To help you
    Just take my hand and never give up
    Because no matter
    How tough the journey gets
    We’ll get there in the end together.

    You and me together no one can stop us now
    You and me together no one can hold us back. Oh on!
    You and me forever from now until the end of time.

    Do you remember
    When we were kid?
    And we didn’t have
    A worry in the word
    And now we have to look out
    For each other
    Because we will be friends forever.

    You and me together no one can stop us now
    You and me together no one can hold us back. Oh on!
    You and me forever from now until the end of time.
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That was amazing. It really made me feel warm inside. You wrote that at 14. Wow! Even at 14 you were an outstanding poet.
     
  3. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Yep, that's right, this was my first step to becoming the pet I am today
     
  4. Mr. Van Whippy ♥ Biscuits and cookies

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    I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! It's sooooooo (explodes in the air from happines) beautiful! :D
     
  5. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I don't really think it's that good, but I am prond of it, since I carried on my skill of writting after writing this lol
     
  6. Shadow Banned

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    Very nice, great piece of work.

    Not to brag, but, I'm 14 right now and I write songs..alot.
     
  7. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    I know, I've read your lyrics and they're fantastic.

    Anniexo is a great poet, who like you writes from the heart.
     
  8. cloudfinalfantasy3 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Love it wait i said it wrong i LOVE IT!!