{Wake From The Pain}

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  1. Nate_River Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Basically, i wrote this for my girlfriend... Yes i know... "OMG! HE HAS A GIRLFRIEND!!!" get over it... but yeah... bored one night and this is the first one that rhymes... in a way...





    Wake from the pain.
    Like it was all a dream.
    Wake from the pain.
    From a world unseen.
    Make sure you hold her.
    Hold her real tigh.
    Cause for all you know,
    it could be your last night.
    When she takes you by the hand,
    look her in the eyes
    Tell her you love her.
    Make it from inside.
    And when she's all alone and crying.
    An all alone in tears.
    Touch her gently.
    Protect her from her fears.


    I Love You.
     
  2. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    Sounds really serious.
    I wish me and Nate were like that still... ._.
    But it's my fault, nothing against him... :|

    But anyway, very nice. I like it. (:
     
  3. RieRen Traverse Town Homebody

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    I really like this poem, you did a good job on it. I bet your girlfriend will like it too.
     
  4. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    That was good. Loved it!