Yet another song I'm working on

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  1. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    This song is untitled for now, and I'm still working on it.

    Verse 1:

    I feel so safe in your arms right now,
    And I wish there was a way we could stay like this somehow
    I'm so lucky to have you here,
    And I know that it's crystal clear
    That you're here to stay
    Please don't go away
    Because

    Chorus 1:

    I need someone to hold me,
    I need someone to love me for who I am
    Don't put me down like your friends do
    Can't they see our love for each other?

    Verse 2:

    I can't wait to see you tonight
    If loving you is wrong, then I don't wanna be right
    You're my knight in shining armor, my hero
    I die inside when it's time for you to go
    I really want us to stay together
    Forever and ever because

    Chorus 1:

    I need someone to hold me,
    I need someone to love me for who I am
    Don't put me down like your friends do
    Can't they see our love for each other?
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    well, the message goes through

    very clearly like most of your songs.

    and it rhymes....but remember not all songs have everything rhyming in each verse.