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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    You will never know what comes next
    Life is an open book
    There is no fate at all
    You choose your future

    Life may be misery and sadness
    In a second may be happiness
    But you choose to change
    So don´t give up the happiness

    You may choose to suffer
    Open your eyes in this moment
    There is only a chance to live
    Don´t waste it now

    You have to choose your own future
    The life is not sealed in stone
    And ever if is
    You have to break it now

    You have to be free
    You are not a robot, nobody can command you
    And the only way to set free
    Is to break the mold

    Don´t cry
    Everything shall be alright
    Don´t let the past torture you
    Because you can control your own future

    You will never knows what comes now
    Dreams may come true
    But think in positive
    Because the pain will end killing you

    So you don´t need to be chained down to the ground
    Is time to choose now
    Time to put the past behind you
    Time to decide your future
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    In resume: You decide your future :P.
     
    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  2. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    hey nice poem chaser its good that ur writing happy poems too
     
    Sadden Blood Warrior, Dec 8, 2007
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  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^ :3.
     
    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  4. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    AWESOME! XD XD
     
    Heaven's Angel, Dec 8, 2007
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  5. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^.
     
    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  6. Dark Shadow Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ummm three words......TO MUCH HAPPY...*head explodes*
     
    Dark Shadow, Dec 8, 2007
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  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Is your fault for reading it >.>...
     
    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  8. Dark Shadow Merlin's Housekeeper

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    i know..i regret it...no offence
     
    Dark Shadow, Dec 8, 2007
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  9. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Is okay...
     
    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  10. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    If it matters, I think there's some spelling errors. Correct me if im wrong.

    Besides that, it was really good :3
    I like more depressing poems >.<
    Thats just me.
    I really like it.
     
    myoblivion, Dec 8, 2007
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  11. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Then read one of my old poems if you like depresing poems, and thanks ^^.
     
    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  12. Dark Shadow Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ya i know how u feel i like depressing poems and she didnt do as bad as me MAN U SHOULD SEE HOW MUCH SPELLING ERRORS I HAVE!!
     
    Dark Shadow, Dec 8, 2007
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  13. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  14. cloud's buddy Traverse Town Homebody

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    better than anything i'll be ever to write
     
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  15. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thank you ^^.
     
    Laplace, Dec 8, 2007
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  16. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Great job chaser.

    I just love your poems, they make me smile. I love happy!
    ​
     
    O R A N G E, Dec 9, 2007
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  17. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks ^^.
     
    Laplace, Dec 9, 2007
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  18. SnoofyXChristhor Banned

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    Risk approves of this poetry.
     
    SnoofyXChristhor, Dec 9, 2007
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  19. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks :3.
     
    Laplace, Dec 9, 2007
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  20. Destined Working for WDW

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    This poem is really well worded, I like it, saw some spelling errors, but nothing to major. Your first stanza is my favorite.
     
    Destined, Dec 9, 2007
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