You'll Be There

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    When I feel sorrow
    You're always there to
    cheer me up.

    When I feel joy
    You're always there
    Laughing with me.

    When I feel anger
    You're always there
    making me feel better.

    When I feel lonely
    You're always there
    so I know I'm not alone.

    When I feel depression
    You're always there
    holding my hand.

    Through every problem
    and every feeling
    I know that you'll be there
    to make it better.

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    This is just a little something I decided to write... I have been going through some emotional problems for reasons I haven't figured out... but my friends are always there to help me through it... so I wrote this poem dedicated to them... you guys rock! :D
    (and this is my first poem so i hope you like it! ^.^)
     
  2. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    YAY!!!!!!!!! :glomp: hehehehe YOU ROCK TOO :D
     
  3. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    :D hehehe... :glomp: so you liked it then?
     
  4. Donaut Banned

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    Very rocky rhythm, but I like it nonetheless. =D
     
  5. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks! it is a free verse... so it isn't really suppossed to have rhythm... :p
     
  6. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Awesome job! :) Am I one of your friends you're dedicating this to...?
     
  7. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    *nods* yep! you always told me that you'd be there for me and i could come to you with any problem... and when i did, you always managed to cheer me up or help me through it... :glomp: thanks! :P
     
  8. Donaut Banned

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    Yeah, but rhythm poems aren't bad either.
     
  9. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    im hoping cause i always hang out with you at school and just hanging out, that youre talking about me too......

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  10. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    true... but i suck at rhytm... >.<

    :glomp: of course i am! XD XD
     
  11. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    *:glomp: DestinyStar* Aww, thanks so much honey...you know I'm always there for you! And don't worry, rhythm can be hard, but any sort of poem is always beautiful. :)
     
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    yesh! *triumphant pose* 10 points!
     
  13. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Thanks for being there, guys!

    and now i wrote a Christmas poem... O.o
     
  14. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Ooh, can you post it? I'd like to read it. :)
     
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  16. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Oh...you must miss her...well, write away. :) It'll help to pour out your feelings...and don't worry, you can always talk to your sister over the phone/internet, and she'll come back eventually...*hugs* Don't worry...

    And I commented on the poem by the way. :)
     
  17. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    Very nice Destiny.....pretty good length....good atmosphere......I hope to see more....
     
  18. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    thanks! u guys rock! XD XD

    and my sis is coming back at the end of the weekend... she's just gonna help out a bit with the hurricane damages... but nothing feels the same without her...

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=1216842#post1216842

    i suggest you don't read this poem if you don't like sad stuff...
     
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