Your True Side

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    These tears I cry,
    I cry for you.
    I cry for you,
    My love,
    My dear.

    There's no one else I'd
    Rather be with,
    No one else I'd
    Rather share this
    Moment with.

    You ripped my heart to pieces,
    But I love you anyhow.
    My feelings for you
    Will never change,
    No matter what you do.

    All the pain you've caused me,
    All my suffering,
    My aching.
    That's all part of the past.
    It doesn't matter anymore.

    I don't care if
    What you did was wrong.
    I don't care if you
    Made me feel like
    I wasn't any good.

    I know the new you,
    The real you.
    The one who truly
    Loves me and will never
    Let me go.

    I know your true side,
    And I know you're afraid to show it.
    But even though it's hard to see
    Behind you're hazel eyes,
    I know that you're just like me.~
     
  2. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    Yikes. This is good, but at the same time a little haunting...did something happen?
     
  3. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    No... just not in my best of moods right now... >>

    now that I reread it, it's a little scary... *hides under a table*
     
  4. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    I have to agree O_O

    O well, once again, you did a great job. :D
     
  5. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    lol that's the good thing... when my emotions screw up like this, then I can write good poetry... this is my second one today, a new record for this month! ;D

    thanks guys ^^
     
  6. Destined Working for WDW

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    o.O

    And another side of DS surfaces. I like it, but just curious if you meant to repeat the 2nd line. It works, but was just wondering if it was a subconscious thing of not.
     
  7. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    yup... I meant to do that... ^-^ actually, this whole poem was subconcious... seriously, I was practically staring out into space when I wrote it O.o