Zexion's Will (Chapter 20)

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Okay,Just Curious,How Am I Doing With This Story?

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  1. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Alright,this ones going to be weird...

    Zexion's Will
    Chapter 20
    ~??????? ????~

    Xigbar and Zexion released eachother. Zexion looked up the stairs.He started to walk up them,Xigbar following behind him. Zexion walked up into his old room. He carefully stepped around the drawings on the floor. He stood beside his bed,and picked up the Book.

    Xigbar walked in,following his steps to avoid the pictures. He stood infront of Zexion,who was staring at the Book.

    "I thought for sure this was burned to ashes..." Zexion said,amazed.

    "Strange,but I'm glad it's okay.." Xigbar said.

    "Same here,Xiggy.." Zexion said. He then placed the Book on the bed.

    "Zexion..?" Xigbar asked.

    "This Book...is a part of my past..this place...It belongs here...." Zexion said.

    "I understand.." Xigbar said.

    The 2 Nobodies started to walk out of the room. Zexion stopped at the door. An overwhelming pain entered his mind,and he held his head. He dropped to his knees,and everything faded to black...

    ~??????? ????~

    Zexion was completely surrounded by darkness. The only thing he saw was a platform he was kneeling on. He slowly rose,and looked down. The platform was light grey,with a VERY dull glow to it. There was a picture of Zexion standing with his arms crossed,eyes closed,and head down. On the right,there were pictures of Komi, Fajine, Shiro, Salena, Valerie, Hewie, Zack, and Sixor. On the left were pictures of Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lexaus, Saiix, Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, Larxene, and Roxas.

    Zexion stared at it. "What the hell..?" He muttered under his breath.

    "Zexion.." He heard a voice whisper from the darkness.

    "Huh?" Zexion said.

    "Zexion..You know..." The voice said.

    "Know? Know what??" Zexion asked,thoroughly confused.

    "About The Nobody Heaven..." A new voice said.

    Zexion crossed his arms. "I've heard of it..." He said.

    "I told you..." A 3ed voice said.

    "Yeah.." Zexion said.

    "Do you know..how to reach it??" The 1st voice asked.

    Zexion struck a thoughtful pose. "No." He said.

    "I know. All 3 of us do.." Said the 2nd voice.

    "Well..what is it??" Zexion asked.

    "Heaven..for Nobodies..." The 3ed voice said.

    "How do I reach it??" Zexion asked.

    "Hehe..should we tell??" The second voice asked.

    "No." The 3ed voice said.

    "Com'on! Let's give him a hint!!" The 2nd voice said.

    "Well..it would be fair to give him a hint..I guess.." The 3ed voice said.

    "Okay,I'll give you a hint,Cloaked Schemer..." The first voice said. "Only through death can you reach Heaven..."

    ~Black Mansion~

    Zexion opened his eyes slowly. He was on the floor. He got up. "Xigbar??" He called.

    He then heard slashing sounds comming from outside. He got up and ran down the stairs. He threw the door open,and ran outside. Xigbar, Shiro, Salena, Valerie, Zeck, and Hewie were fighting a Behemoth.

    Zexion called forth his Book. "In this time,in this place,rain down lances!!!" He yelled.

    12 Lances shot down,rapid fire. The Behemoth was already close to death,and the lances finished it off. It fell down,and faded into darkness as the heart floated away.

    The group gathered. "So,what now?" Hewie asked.

    "I think it's about time to find the Black Materia..." Zexion said.

    Everyone nodded. The group,lead by Zexion,walked off.

    That first voice crossed his mind. "Only through death can you reach Heaven..."

    The next chapter will be insane!! YAY INSANITY!!!

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  2. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Scary! Great job! I'll keep on reading until you finish or something very weird happens to me.
     
  3. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Uhh...lets REALLY hope it's the first one...Thanks!!!
     
  4. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Totally. And thanks for replying to my story. Whenever someone posts, it really makes my day. Thanks!

    And continue your amazing writing! Zexion will always be one of my favorites but now I'm starting to fall in love with Xigbar too! (even though he's a bad guy in my story...:D )
     
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    This is AWESOME! I hope to read it until you stop, or someone locks me in a closet for life.....:(

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  6. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Cool!!! Yeah,I'll read the next chapter in your story after I eat. Then I'm continuing my other story,Organization XIII Runs A Kids show...
     
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  8. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Yay!! Thnak you!! I like how a lot of people like my stories!! Thanks you guys!!!!
     
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    HUZZAH!!! XDDDDD

    *high fives you*

    Anyways... I liked your story, also! =3 Keep at it!!! XDDDD

    *dances to some random song*
     
  10. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    i love that story :D so silly but very funny
     
  11. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Thanks!! I'm having A LOT of fun writing these stories!!!
     
  12. FireBall Merlin's Housekeeper

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    i love this story.it draws me in
     
  13. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    I LOVE those kinds of stories. There are some writers on this site that can type like that,too!!
     
  14. Reoy Hollow Bastion Committee

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    uh yea funny thing there you forgot Luxord :D this story is interesting!! i love it love it love it if it stops! i will have to lock myself in the restroom lol
     
  15. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    oooooo i really loved that one, great job
     
  16. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    OMG!!! I didn't even notice that!! Thanks a lot!!! It's been editted. And,thanks for liking you guys!!
     
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    AWESOME! can't wait for the 21st chapter. YOU"RE A GOD TO ME!!!!:D
     
  18. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    *Blink blink* Umm...I am?? Okay...Anyways,chapter 21 will be up tommorrow. I'm about 1/2 way through it!! And,thanks!! (It will be up tommorrow,because I waited too long to work on it...sorry).