Zhe Axelrific Family!! (Zhe One Zhe Only)

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  1. YES YES! CHANGE IT!!

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  2. No! Keep it the same!! I like it the way it is.

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  1. Lulus_Moogle Twilight Town Denizen

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    LOL! OK! They are all yaoi...

    I gotta go now sooo bye!
     
  2. dandanrevolutionextreme Banned

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    1st video
    axel: could use a better wig

    xemnas: no, just no....

    roxas: again, better wig

    namine: actress is actually pretty good


    2nd video

    couldnt hear 1/2 of wat was sed, got bored half way through and stopped


    3rd
    intently watched the entire thing....intently because they were both played by girls....if they were ACTORS, i would have had to run to the bathroom to throw up, but, no, they were female....

    and riku, its called an interior decorator, get one!
     
  3. Stardust Chaser

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    I just finished my fanfiction =D. Er. I could put it up but it hasn't really been edited yet...If you guys don't mind that, then I will...
     
  4. dandanrevolutionextreme Banned

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    sure, watev, i dont mind....
     
  5. Namine4ever101 Moogle Assistant

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    (its emily) yes put it up and give us the link!!!!
     
  6. Stardust Chaser

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    Okaay.

    KH1 Spoilers. Woo?

    Dark Lullaby ["Emotionless. Painless. Breathless."]

    Written by Stardust

    Description: The shadows were all he had left. [Sora]

    Rating: Er...Has some metions of blood and killing, though I don't think I cursed at all. Not much if I did. Aannddd...Use your judgement, I suppose.

    Notes: Quite an angsty (I'm hoping) fiction of how Sora feels about killing Heartless and Nobodies (mostly Heartless). Er, technically, I thought he'd feel terrible about killing them in the game after becoming one, because he'd experienced how they're feeling, y'know? Well, I guess he's not so I'M GOING TO MAKE HIM! Also, I don't own KH ;D.

    Objective: Spell out K I N G D O M H E A R T S using the beginning of each paragraph while making it not too noticable to the reader. I think it's too choppy and I fail XD.

    Keeping himself shut out from the world was the only thing he had left.

    It hurt, watching them fall, one by one at the mercy of his blade. He'd been like them once -- he knew what it was like and he couldn't stand it. It was a numb sense of pain, a numb sense of regret. But he knew they hurt more than he did. They just wanted a heart, they just wanted to be found. And they envied him for being the only one that fortunate.

    Never would their dreams be realized. Instead, a cold steel blade would be forced into their chest, and twisted cruelly until they dissappeared into strands of darkness. And he could hear them scream, as they felt pain for the first time again. Real pain. Real fear.

    Grins and laughter would cover up his sorrow and his tears. He would cry himself to sleep at night, cry himself to sleep by the lullaby the shadows murmured to him. Shadows that would be dead tomorrow, he knew. He would kill them all tomorrow, yet they comforted him, and that scared him. It scared him so much, that they still treated him like their own -- like he didn't have a heart. Like he was still Heartless, like them.

    Darkness had consumed him, and he remembered slipping away, falling endlessly. He couldn't breathe or scream, he couldn't see or hear. His memories began to slip away, and then with it went all rational thought, and suddenly he was a monster, he wanted a heart and he wanted emotion and he wanted --

    Only he got what he wanted. He was saved. He saw the light and he heard his name, he heard a voice, and everything came rushing back too quickly to comprehend -- he was bathed in memories, in names and thoughts, and caught up in a jumble of words and feelings. They were jealous of him then. But now, he was afraid he was jealous of them -- what he would give, to never have to feel again...

    More and more, with each passing day, he felt himself slipping. At first, he knew it was darkness. He was slowly falling into darkness, and there was nothing he could do -- but now he wasn't sure anymore. Was he falling into darkness, or was he falling into himself? Maybe he'd already been swallowed. Maybe it was only a matter of time.

    His heart was shattered. Smashed into a million pieces. Torn apart and put together again a million times over. He was covered in scars only he could see, bathed in the blood of millions of innocent people who just wanted hearts, who just wanted to be like him. But he was a tool. A tool used to kill them, to make sure they didn't get what they desired. He wasn't supposed to care.

    Every passing day became harder and harder for him to bear. It was like glass, his heart. They could fix him, tell him everything was okay. They could put his heart back together, but the scars would still show, and it would become more and more unstable each time it was rebuilt. It would break into more and more pieces with each fall, until one day, they couldn't fix him. Until one day, he'd snap.

    All of them knew this. All of his friends. All of his enemies. All of them, and everyone inbetween knew this -- but they never told him. Some didn't because they didn't want to hurt him. Some didn't because they did want to hurt him. They were all hiding the truth from him, hiding the truth that he already knew -- but that was the only part they didn't know. Yuffie's cheerful smiles, Aerith's kind words, Cid's constant ramblings -- all to hide that they knew who he would be someday. What he would be someday.

    Regret. Pain. Sadness. One by one, his emotions became blurs. His emotions became his scars. He knew, in the back of his mind, there was no way to save him. No way to save them -- all of the Heartless and Nobodies disappearing daily. And he knew, when he finally lost himself, he would be the only one left. Who would be there to rid the world of him?

    There was a moment where he stopped to think. To think of the people who would miss him. To think of the people that would need him. He was falling and only he knew how much time he had left -- how would he tell them all, when it was time to disappear?

    Severed friendships. Broken promises. They wouldn't understand. They don't understand.

    ~

    A white room.

    Lights off.

    He only lurks in the shadows -- the shadows are all he can still trust. The shadows are all he has left. Emotionless. Painless. Breathless.

    But for Sora, the only things he has left...Will be his demise.


    Ahahaaaa, fin...-Dies- I HATE IT...

    Er.

    It's only my second one so BLEH. And I have yet to edit it...But is it okay to you, so far? -blink-
     
  7. Namine4ever101 Moogle Assistant

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    YOU SHOULD JOIN FANFICTION.NET!!!!!
     
  8. Stardust Chaser

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    I whaaaa? ~

    XDD FF.net is one scary place...I only occasionally read fanfics...But I'm not too good at writing (Obviously XO Bah, humbug) and I'd probably end up abandoning it ><...

    Woahwait, does this mean you liked it? o.O;;?!
     
  9. Namine4ever101 Moogle Assistant

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    Yea i loved it i thought it was awsome!!!
     
  10. Stardust Chaser

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    -Stabs joo-

    You're not suppooooosseddd to like it! >=O

    Just kidding...But I'm glad you did ;D. Even if I really don't, the entire time I was writing it, I was like, "Crap, this is repetitive...This is depressing...SHOOT I USED THE WRONG LETTER! -Backspaces entire paragraph-"

    (And that, my friends, is why it took me all day .___. )
     
  11. dandanrevolutionextreme Banned

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    i like it....there were areas that were somewhat hard to follow but, i made it through, and it was pretty good
     
  12. Namine4ever101 Moogle Assistant

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    yes that would be me if i made a story!

    oh i just made a new desktop go here to see it plez:http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=4zbjn75
     
  13. Stardust Chaser

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    LOL.

    Ah, yes, the thing with following XDDD. I had to start the paragraphs with their letter and I didn't know what to put so I kinda...RAMBLED...Er XD My bad. But thank you for the input and I'm glad you like it! =D I shall be...Er...Revising it sometime soon, then maybe posting it in the Creativity Corner. Maybe. XO

    EDIT: Oi, love the desktop <3.
     
  14. dandanrevolutionextreme Banned

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    u should do that....
    that is an awesome background, any way i could get that?
     
  15. Namine4ever101 Moogle Assistant

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    i made it.I just found abunch of pictures on deviant art and then made them my desktop
     
  16. dandanrevolutionextreme Banned

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    u didnt save before making it your background?
     
  17. Stardust Chaser

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    Argh, I gtg.

    Glad you liked the ficcie =3. Talk to you guys laterr.
     
  18. Namine4ever101 Moogle Assistant

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    oh yea i saved it in my paint....idk what u want me to do im kinda lost....
     
  19. dandanrevolutionextreme Banned

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    c ya tomorrow afternoon (i hate work....)

    just upload on tinypic
     
  20. Namine4ever101 Moogle Assistant

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    okay i will tomorrow im gonna get off for tonight me and jenna are gonna build a fort
    and hav fun at work!!! (lol i love be 11 and not having to work!!!)
     
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