The Nobody Heaven

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  1. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Yep...the next chapter....

    BTW, Here are the links to the first and second chapters.

    Chapter 1
    Chapter 2

    Due to the new rule, I'm putting the rest of the chapters in this Thread alone.

    The Nobody Heaven
    Chapter 3
    ~Xaldin's Worries Fade~

    Xaldin fell straight to his knees, and his 6 lances stabbed the ground, surrounding him. 'No!! I can't die!! Not yet!!' He thought.

    Xaldin stumbled, left, then right. 'No...I HAVE to kill Sora!!!' He thought.

    He suddenly felt immense pain shoot through him. 'NOOO!!! I have to get revenge for Larxene!!' He thought.

    Suddenly, light shot straight through him. 'Nooo!!!! I want to stay alive!!!' His thoughts continued.

    The darkness overtook that light, and he started to fade. 'Why? Kingdom Hearts...WHY?!!' He thought sadly.

    He was almost faded. 'Kingdom Hearts...'

    'Organization XIII...' His thoughts finished as he faded into The Darkness...

    ~??? ?????? ??????~

    ...All he saw...was nothing. Darkness. As silent as the wind. He placed one hand on the cold, slippery ground, the cold lonely wind caressing it. He shoved himself up, and stood up. He opened his eyes, to see an amazing veiw...

    There was an enormous town stretching further than he could see. He saw the huge, pure white castle reaching far into the sky's abyss. A cool, white mist flowed into the wind's caress, throughout the entire place. And the sky had bright, twinkling stars in the dark blue hues that belonged to the endless sky. He was in The Nobody Heaven...

    Xaldin lightly brushed his right sideburn. He wished they weren't there...but then again...he was used to them. He stared at the castle, completely shocked...

    'My heart!' He thought suddenly. He quickly placed his right hand over the place in which his heart should lie...and it was there, beating in a nice smooth rythem. His mind was raceing at the speed of the wind's rush...

    "XALDIN!!!" He heard his name be called.

    He turned around to see Larxene. She walked up to him. "...Larxene?" Xaldin asked, breathlessly.

    "Yeah. You finally arrived. It took long enough..." Larxene said with a sigh. "You should have died sooner..." She added.

    Xaldin sighed. "Where are we?" He asked, confused.

    "Heaven." Larxene said simply.

    "This is...heaven?" Xaldin asked slowly.

    "Yeah." Larxene said. "Vexad's here, too." She added. "He's been here for five years..."

    "...My brother?" Xaldin asked.

    "Yeah. I was hoping you'd get here faster then a year..." Larxene said. She sighed. "Then again, you always were...kinda slow...." She added.

    Xaldin glared lightly. "Anyways, how are you?" He asked, changing the subject.

    "Oh, I'm fine." Larxene said. "I'm guessing Sora got you, eh?" She asked.

    Xaldin looked down. "Yes..." He said quietly.

    "Heh, he got me as well. And Demyx, and Marluxia. We've been just waiting for the rest of you guys to die." Larxene said bluntly.

    Xaldin nodded. He looked at the castle. "It's huge..." He said, dazed.

    "Yeah...com'on. Demyx just got here. I want you to go see them. It's been a long time, Xaldin..." Larxene said.

    Xaldin looked up at her. "...Are we going to be here forever?" Xaldin asked.

    "Duh! It's Heaven!! Of course we'll be here forever! What are you, stupid?" Larxene asked. She then laughed. "Com'on!" She said. She then started to run up the path.

    Xaldin started to run up the path as well. He then stopped and looked up at the sky. "Finally...there's nothing to worry about anymore..." He whispered to himself.

    "Xaldin! Are you going to star gaze all day??" Larxene called, very far ahead on the path.

    "Oh, comming Larx!" Xaldin called. He then started running down the path quickly...

    '...But we have had eachother from the beggining...'



    So...what do you guys think? Feel free to ask or say anything! Thank you!!

    ~FireNanaki's Insane Productions~
     
  2. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    This story always makes me feel so warm and fuzzy inside... =3

    Keep it rockin'! TT^TT
     
  3. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    AWESOMENESS ON A STICK!!!

    You just totally made my Friday-day! (your stories seem to do that alot, lol :D)

    But this was great! :D

    I really can't wait to hear Axel's, Demyx's, and Zexion's parts. (those are my favorite characters :D:D:D)
     
  4. Nanaki Broken in six places

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    Chapter 4

    Sorry about the wait for my chapters, guys! ^^;

    Next chappy!!



    The Nobody Heaven
    Chapter 4
    ~Vexen's New Existance~

    "Well, be seeing you." Axel said. He snapped his fingers.

    Flames formed and encassed Vexen as he screamed out in

    pain. 'NOO!!! Why me??? WHY ME??!' Were his sadenned

    thoughts.

    The flames faded off as the blackness of the dark rose up

    from his body. 'Why?? What did I do??? I just...' His

    thoughts trailed off.

    He was fading fast. 'Kingdom Hearts...' His thoughts

    called.

    'Organization XIII...' His thoughts finished as he

    completely faded...

    ~??? ?????? ??????~

    Nothing...nothing at all....there was...Nothing. Vexen

    layed his hand down on the icey cool ground. He shoved

    his shivering body up off the chilly ground. He slowly

    stood upstraight, then slowly opened his eyes, to behold

    something...that no Organization's Nobody has ever

    seen....

    A HUGE white castle towered over the large black

    buildings in the distance. A pure white, cool mist flowed

    lightly throughout this enchanted place. The midnight

    blue hues of the sky were lightly dabbed with pure white

    stars that were strewn far into the abyss of everything.

    Heaven...The Nobody Heaven...

    Vexen Looked down at his hand. He had a strange feeling.

    A FEELING. He slowly placed his hand over his chest...and

    felt thumping inside. He had his heart. He was in a

    strange place. He...didn't know what to do or think...

    He slowly started to walk don the cold, misty streets,

    twords the white castle...

    ~Castle/Front Doors~

    Vexen walked up to the closed doors. He placed his hand

    on the right door, and closed his eyes. "This...is

    amazing...." He whispered.

    Vexen then grabbed the handle, and opened the door

    slowly. He gazed inside, to see the mist still flowing

    lightly, and the castle was even larger than before.
    There was a double staircase that lead to a balcony

    above. A stair case on the left, and one on the right,

    both were rounded, like a royal entrance. There was a

    large door in the middle below, and a door on each side

    of it. Above, there were large double doors in the

    middle, and single doors lining the halls, which went on

    from both sides.

    Vexen gazed up at the left staircase. He slowly walked up

    to them, and gently placed his hand on the end of the

    stair rail. He stared at the hard wood of it, thinking

    hard. 'This is REAL. It's not a figment of my

    imagination...I really have my heart....' He thought. He

    then released the wooden rail.

    Vexen slowly walked up the stairs. He reached the top,

    and headed for the double doors. He walked up to them,

    and gently placed his left hand on the left door. '...The

    Throne Room?' He questioned in his mind.

    Vexen grabbed the handle, and opened the door. He walked

    in to see 13 white, incredibly tall thrones reaching up

    twords the ceilling, in a circle pattern. On the white

    floor below, The Nobody Symbol was carved. Three of the

    Nobody Symbols were carved in different parts of the

    walls. There was a Nobody Symbol in the ceilling,

    mirroring the one on the floor.

    Vexen walked up to the second chair on the right. Each

    Organization member had their own way of getting in their

    chair.

    'Xemnas teleports. Xaldin High Jumps. Lexaeus...climbs.

    Saiix has a rope tied to the chair. Demyx uses blasts of

    water. Larxene uses a tiny zap of lightning, or a boost

    from Xaldin's Lances. Roxas..well, he used to High Jump.

    Marluxia uses a rose's vine tied to the chair. Luxord

    uses his cards to make a small staircase leading up to

    his seat. Axel uses a blast of fire. Zexion teleports.

    Xigbar also teleports.

    'I use other means, though...' Vexen thought.

    Vexen walked straight up to the tall chair. He noticed

    that his name and number were carved on it. Their names

    and numbers were never carved on their chairs before.

    Vexen turned twords Xigbar's chair, to see Xigbar's name

    and number were not carved in it.

    '...When we die....we come here. Our names are carved in

    our chairs. We gain our hearts...' Vexen thought. He

    turned back twords his chair. He then kneeled down, and

    placed his hand on the very base of the chair. He felt

    around for a bit, and stopped his hand perfectly in the

    center of the base. He pressed his hand on it, pushing a

    hidden button, and quickly backed up.

    The chair suddenly dropped, falling into the floor, and

    stopping at the height of a normal arm chair's height.

    Vexen sat on it. He then grabbed the right arm. He

    flicked open a secret, small lid on it, and underneath,

    it revealed a button and a card. Vexen pressed the

    button, and his chair quickly rose to it's correct

    position.

    Vexen then grabbed the card, and held it up in the dim

    moonlight. 'I think I'll enjoy this. I shall experiment

    to understand it more. And this...' Vexen thought. He

    tilted the card to the left, sliding the light off it, to

    reveal a dice card that belonged to Luxord. '...I'll see

    you soon, Luxord...'

    '...And we shall always stand by eachother...'