Heart's Poetry

I do. They are full of emotion a passion. And I do hope you are right.

 

You have quite the talent for writing poems, I must say.
My favorite would have to be the first one. Also like Risk had said, I do hope things get better for you. ​

 

I like these my dear,I must say.
The form that they are written in makes it easy to read,and you can really feel the emotions behind everything.
And that last one was just brilliant.
The first one aswell,but the last one...meh,it just struck me as good.
Lovely work sweetie,keep it up~

 

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm really happy that somepeople like my poems ^^ *hugs everyone*

 

Holy heck almost a year since I updated this... Sorry everyone!

The first three poems are VERY dark and where written about a month ago after a fight with my best friend. Things are better now but I never got to post them. Cursing is in the second one- sorry about that.



She Don’t Get It

She doesn’t get it
She doesn’t get that I do wanna go
That I just lie to save myself drama
That I wanna go so badly
But I won’t even bother
Cuz I know she’ll have a better time if I don’t go
Cuz she’ll be with her real friends
Instead of just an outsider like me


Fu*k the World

Fu*k the world
Let it blow up
Let it burn
Let it die
The people in this world
Make it not worth living in
So just fu*k it
Fu*k everything
The effort just ain’t worth it
The pain just ain’t worth it
The sadness just ain’t worth it

Unwanted

I should have known
She didn’t want me there
Hell I even knew that
He didn’t want me there
So I just don’t get
Why I try to be included
When I know I never will

Very sorry after all the sadness the last three poems.. Hopefully things will not be that dark ever again.


This next poem I wrote over the summer and has spoilers from the latest season of Falling Skies but since I don't think anyone on here really watches it (plus the episode came out this summer) I'm not going to be putting it in spoiler tags.

A Poem of Remembrance

You were a fighter
You were a solider
Although you were just a kid
You always fought your hardest
And you never gave up
No matter what hardships
Where thrown your way
But now you’re gone, Jimmy
But you will never
Never be forgotten

RIP Jimmy Boland of Falling Skies
1st episode of Season 1- 3rd episode of Season 2
May you never be forgotten


SPOILERS FOR RECENT NARUTO CHAPTERS COMING UP

Spoiler

Next poem is in memory of Neji, who died in a recent chapter. RIP my dear Neji~

Farewell

You’ve left this world
My dear, brave solider
You saved us all
And now you’re gone
So rest now, Neji
Rest in peace
Although you will be missed
You shall be in our hearts forever
And never forgotten
Ave Atque Vale, Neji


Note: Ave Atque Vale means hail and farewell and is a reference towards an awesome book series

Next poem is for Ace from One Piece and is to Ace from Luffy. It kinda has spoilers but what happened was like more then 100 chapters ago so yeah... I'm not putting it in spoiler tag XD
This poem was written today.


A Wish That Can’t Come True

Wishing it was a dream
Wishing that you weren’t really gone
Wishing you were here with me
Wishing you were alive
Instead of gone
You died to save me
And you died in my arms
And there was nothing I could do
And now I miss you so much
I will never forget you, brother

RIP Ace, why must all the awesome characters die...


And that is all! Hope to write more soon!

 

I'm sensing a recurring theme with you later few poems and they are not half bad I must say. And in my experience the poems in which you vent are among the best ones.