KH-Vids Royale

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Mari, Oct 1, 2006.

  1. Shuya Nanahara Banned

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    Alright, I'm a huge Battle Royale fan and I have a few icks and bumps with this story;

    1. You completely ripped off BR2, which was awful, although, I have to admit, this is better XD.

    2. What is up with this Rem girl? Seems like a bad cliche plot line.

    3. The name "crum" for a small boy makes me a bit scared. But, y'know, I guess it works well.

    Things I liked:

    1. Despite Wild Seven being a highly-trained super violent terrorist group, at heart they are still just kids. I really felt that when they were laughing at Monkey in the room.

    2. When Rem turned on Darkandroid, I seriously felt pain. It hurt to see such a betrayal.

    3. "Flower of flesh and blood" was used to describe Zel's death. Isn't that from the cult Guinea Pig series? If that's the reference you're making, I love it. Such intense movies, you're probably the only one here who can stomach them (judging by this story).

    Anyway, great job, and I am awaiting chapter 10.
     
  2. Cin Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp Derp

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    Kay guys, chapter 3 is up for your enjoyment.
     
  3. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    Wow, wonderful chapters Cinny.
    You write so very detailed.
    Great job =D
     
  4. Yukai Traverse Town Homebody

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    The entire series KHVR series is based off of BR obviously. I like this version better though...

    Rem is cool! XD

    Crum...

    Yes. The Wild Seven are really just a bunch of kids that beat "The Game"... I feel sorry for THEM. Not the government... The government in this story can burn for all I care. They killed me!

    Lol. I laughed at the whole Double Agent thing.

    Really!? o.o

    CHAPTER 10 PLEASE! AND STICKY!
     
  5. Soku Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Good chapter, keep up the good work.
     
  6. Starboy Destiny Islands Resident

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    I think Roxas got banned.. no more khvr2.... :(:(:(:(:(:(:(

    People say YOU are Roxas, which would seem kinda weird cuz ur judging ur own story..... ........... ......
     
  7. Alice Banned

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    That's kind of the point. XD
     
  8. Starboy Destiny Islands Resident

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    Oh I get it, even while having the 6 word post rule floating in my head.
     
  9. March of the Dogs Banned

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    lol Roxas, way to judge your own story.
     
  10. Starboy Destiny Islands Resident

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    Since hes back, I think we'll get the new chaps (hoping he did more than pendragon in his absence)
     
  11. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    This extremely awesome story belongs on the first page.
    ~~~
    Will the next chapter be coming out soon?
     
  12. Roxas OG

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    Yeah, sorry, I've been lazy. It'll be up by tomorrow.
     
  13. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Lawl...
    Anywas thanks for telling me. I'm looking foward to reading it.
    =D
     
  14. Roxas OG

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    Yes, this one will focus on Xaldin, and maybe a bit of Alice.
     
  15. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Sound's like it will one interesting chapter! Yet again... can't wait!
     
  16. Alex C: Kingdom Keeper

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    Wow. I'm going (even though I already said this >.>) try to read it this summer. It seems good. Great Job Roxas! =D
     
  17. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    My thoughts exactly!
    (no Axel quote really intended)

    The new chapter's still not up. D=
     
  18. Chaos and Death Banned

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    This story roocks.
    Can't wait for more.
     
  19. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Errr...Roxas is banned again... -_- So we won't see the rest of the story...
    There wasn't a real reason to bump this thread ya know.
    *sigh* oh well

    Edit:
    Hold on, forget about what I said >.>
     
  20. Starboy Destiny Islands Resident

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    Its been a LOT longer than tomorrow.......