The Ultimate Organization II

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  1. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:After many, many long hours of working, my fight with Ares is finally done. And trust me, it was worth it.

    BIC:

    *Ares towered over Darxess and the rest of the arena, his booming laugh filling the chamber and echoing out into the halls, and his large body covering half floor, leaving only a small space for Darxess to maneuver*
    *Darxess could only stare, mouth gaped open*
    Ares:"I think its about time we finish this, old man. As fun as it is to see you there in total awe and fear of my superior strength, I grow tired of waiting. Its about time you go to where all you damn nobodies belong."
    *Ares raised his massive warhammer high above his head*
    Ares:"IN HELL!!"
    *Ares brought his massive warhammer down with his full strength, crashing it into the arena*
    *Darxess barely managed to dodge it, but the sheer force of the impact forced Darxess high into the air and shook the entire chamber, causing even some of the audience members to fall out of their seats*
    *Darxess watched below him, barely conscious, as the arena floor he was standing on crumbled away from the massive impact of the hammer, leaving only the small patch of land that Ares was standing on*
    *Darxess could only watch as his mangled body fell toward the seemingly bottomless pit that lay before him*
    *Darxess tried to open a portal, but his arm was still useless after Ares cut deeply into it earlier in the battle*
    *There was nothing he could do*
    *Ares smiled as he watched Darxess fall, then turned his back to face the crowd, shouting various taunts and boasts*
    *Darxess disappeared in the shadow below*
    *The scoreboard made a beep as it switched over, showing Ares as the winner*
    *This match was over*



    *And yet, it wasn't*

    *Not yet*

    *A crumpled, bloody hand rose over the edge of the arena*
    *Ares was too busy celebrating to notice*
    *The crowd didn't either, in fact, most of them were leaving to watch more of the tournament bloodshed in other arenas*
    *But that didn't change the fact the hand was still there*
    *Or the rest of the old man attached to it*
    *The nearly broken man slowly hobbled over the edge*
    *By the time he made it up, a few of the audience members noticed him*
    *Most of them pointed and laughed and the announcer made a few less than nice comments*
    *However, the more observant members of the audience only needed to take one look into his eyes and found themselves filled with fear*
    *The anger contained within him made some of the closer members of the audience shudder*
    *He took one glare at the audience and one or two of them gasped*
    *It was around this time that Ares finally noticed the small, tiny old nobody standing at his feet*
    *The sight of such a small, worthless opponent in Ares eyes could only make him point and laugh*
    *He even pointed to the scoreboard and told him to go home*
    *But Darxess wasn't going to go home. He had business to take care of. Like saving Orb and his friends. And he didn't even give a damn how many rules he had to break to do it*

    *Darxess summoned his scythe with his still working arm (Cue rock music) and swung it to his side in a battle position*
    *Ares sighed*
    *He hated to kill such a defenseless opponent, but this stubborn insect gave him no other choice*
    *Ares rose his foot and brought it down to squash the pathetic bug*
    *But.......Darxess was too quick for him*
    *By this time, Darxess was already on his toes, and brought his scythe down, impaling it right in Ares’ big toe*
    *Ares shouted in a mix in pain and anger*
    *He lowered his hand to attempt to grab and crush the annoying fly*
    *He was too late*
    *Darxess was already running up Ares’ legs, carving them up as he went*
    *Darxess dashed up the length of Ares’ body, covering all of Ares’ leg, and most of his torso with tiny, bloody cuts*
    *Compared to the size of Ares to Darxess's scythe, these cuts were even less painful than that of a paper cut*
    *But it still annoyed Ares greatly*
    *Darxess went along, still cutting, and eventually placed himself onto Ares’ nose, starring eye to eye in nearly matching fury*
    *But even the rest of the audience could tell whose fury was still greater*

    *All went silent*

    *They stared for a moment that seemed to last nearly an eternity to the audience*
    *Eventually, Ares spoke*
    Ares:"Even now, as you still barely cling to life, you still think you can beat me? A god?!"
    *Darxess did not answer*
    Ares:"Too scared to even speak?! What's the matter?! Just give up now. I might even let you live."
    *But, of course, Ares had no intention of that*
    *Darxess didn't care*
    *Darxess tossed his scythe high into the air*
    *Ares watched it, out of the corner of his eye*
    Ares:"Giving up?"
    Darxess:"No. But I'm giving one last chance for you to give up before I kill you."
    *Ares only laughed*
    *Darxess sighed*
    *He hated to kill such a defenseless opponent, but this stubborn insect gave him no other choice*
    *Darxess clapped his hands together and pressed his hands into Ares face*
    Ares:"That's it? You bore me, nobody."
    *However, the small cuts on Ares began glowing*
    *A few members of the audience mouths gaped open*
    *Those marks were not just minor cuts*

    *They were Alchemy symbols*

    *Ares face went white with fear*
    *Only now did he realize what was happening*
    *The marks on his body began exploding, one by one, inside-out*
    *Ares took a few steps back, his heels hanging over the edge, with explosions covering his entire body*
    *Ares’ head fell back, his mouth open, screaming in pain*
    *It was at the moment that Darxess's scythe fell back down*
    *Darxess caught it in his right arm and spun it around his body*
    *Ares eyes stared at him in fear*
    *But it was too late, he had his chance*
    *Darxess slammed his scythe down, right into that eye filled with fear*
    *Blood squirted in nearly every direction, except for Darxess, who used magic to push it out of the way, making it seem that to the audience even Ares’ blood wanted to avoid Darxess's fury*
    *The arena was then filled with a scream that gave many of the audience nightmares even many years later*
    *Then, there was silence again*
    *The life from Ares faded*
    *His body fell back and faded into the deep, everlasting darkness, crashing partially into the arena, leaving only a small spire left*
    *Darxess hopped off of the corpse as it fell and landed on it spire, watching Ares as he disappeared from view*
    *And he watched with a smile on his face*
     
  2. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: OK. See ya.

    BIC: "So what's next?" Xane asked. "No wait. Let me guess. A dragon, right?"
     
  3. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:Read the ending of the fight. I know its extemely long, but please read it. It turned out extemely well.
     
  4. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Y'know I don't think I've ever seen Darxess do any real alchemy before this. And he killed Ares? Guess we'll have to call Darxess "Kratos" now, huh? XP
     
  5. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:He did a little bit while fighting the chained man, and a tiny bit while fighting Wing, but otherwise, he actually doesn't do too much Alchemy. He earned his title in a different way. A way that will be explained as soon as this tournament is over.
     
  6. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Oh, okay. It's kind of an odd title for Darxess, though.
     
  7. hidden_light Traverse Town Homebody

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    OOC: Meh either way that was an awesome fight Darxess! XD
    Awesome job! XD
    And I wish we could fight Kratos...interesting fight nah? XD
     
  8. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:It will make more sense after the title is explained a bit. Oh, and now that Ares is dead, who will Darxess's next opponent be? If he is allowed to continue in the tournament, that is.
     
  9. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Huh. Let's see......You should fight a Norse god about now......How about Frey?
     
  10. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:Not really familiar with him.

    EDIT: Oh yeah, I finally managed to round up the various fragments of the entire fight with Ares if anyone wants me to pm it so that they can read the whole thing.
     
  11. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Then how about the Frost giant, Ymir?
     
  12. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: Oh hai thur. Please to be subtracting the cape from screenshotz.

    Costume Creator, GO!

    BIC: "But of course, you can't visit wearing that." Adumbral sneered, motioning towards Xeg's outfit.

    "What? I like my old Organization coat!" He retorted.

    "But wouldn't you rather wear our old gear?" Adumbral said with a slight smile, snapping his fingers. A cloud of dark energy descended upon Xeg, and transformed his clothes back to the ones he used to wear when he was alive. The same silver combatsuit. The same protective padding, and harness, and supply belt. The same shock-absorber shoes. The same cool pair of sunglasses he'd found one day. The same stuff he used to wear, before he died that is.

    "Why... why're you giving me all this stuff?" Xegreny asked, baffled.

    "To be honest, your body's in a lot better shape than mine. Since I'm a Heartless, I had to forge mine out of brute strength. Yours on the other hand, is the body we had when we were alive. I want my new body to be in top shape, with our old gear when I take it over. Of course.. I'll have to kill you first. But that'll be nice and easy, now that we're out of that pesky arena." Adumbral said, cracking a wicked smile. "But please, enough of this unpleasantness. I see you've noticed the nice little city behind us. Due to wacky time dilation and such in the Dark Worlds it's been ten years local time since you were here last! You should go see some of the lovely changes that they've made. Have fun!"

    And with that, Adumbral vanished in a cloud of dark energy, spinning upwards into the air. Xeg was nervous. If Adumbral could teleport, manipulate matter (like making clothes), and change shape... AND make a body for himself.. that'd make him.. a lot lot lot better at controlling energy than Xegreny. But.. he didn't have a real body.. just a fake one he made out of energy. I'm not dead yet! I still got that chance! Xeg thought cheerily as he headed into his hometown.

    OOC: So far, nobody's been commenting on me. >:

    This seemed like a good idea when I thought it up.. but your lack of feedback.. worries me. :s

    Also: Forget the old Xeg backstory. I'm rewriting it. Kthx. :3

    EDIT: Wait... where'd everybody go!? DDDD:
     
  13. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:In all honesty, I just got done facing a giant, so no. I'll look up this "Freyr" guy and see what I think of him.Or, maybe, I might even find my own opponent, if no one else minds. That wouldn't be too much of a problem, would it?

    And sorry Xegreny, but I took a bath, had a late dinner, and studied for my test tomorrow, so I was gone the entire time. But, nice post, Xegreny.
     
  14. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: S'ok. It's not like I could've done anything. xP

    Thanks. I just get the feeling I'm not at the same uhm... "level" as some of you guys. Because I read your guys' posts and I'm always like, "wat. I wanna write liek dat."
     
  15. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: Xegreny, you write as well as anyone else on here (except for me, but I'm exceptionally talented at spelling and grammar and ideas and mashing them all into a wonderful story...OK, I'm kidding, XD.)

    All right, NEXT UP!

    BIC: "TIAMAT!" the announcer roared. Xardius flicked his wrist as Tiamat slammed downwards into the ashes of Kraken, its heads roaring with great abandon.

    "A dragon, you were right, Xane," Xardius said. "Wing! Get it from behind!"
     
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    "you got it!"

    wing said running past Xardius, Wind trailing close behind him. He easily made it around the massive creature, and jumped onto the beasts back. Keyblades attempted to trump flesh, only to be rendered ineffective.


    "Any suggestions? He shouted down to the audience. who seemed at a lost for an idea as he was. Odin watch from afar, hand propping up his head, satisfied smirk on his face.


    "Oh you haven't killed us yet of merciful king of the gods" Wing said under his breath as he angled the keyblades trajectory, sliding in between the scales, and passing through the soft flesh underneath.


    "Xardius, Xane, do your stuff!" He called down with a wave, as he began to control the monster with his wind.
     
  17. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: Thanks. Still, it's hard when most people are writing long long posts, and I only write long posts when I actually have an idea. >:

    BIC: As Xeg walked through the streets, he smiled and laughed as he saw places he dimly remembered. Though, at one street, he didn't smile or laugh. He just kind of stood there. On one street, there was a large statue. It was of him. The people here revered him for all the things he'd done for them when, in the end, he'd failed to protect them. How painfully ironic.

    "See?" Adumbral said, stepping out from behind the statue. "With your body, I could easily get the people of this world do do as I wished. Anything really I bet. Like say, even raise an army. And with our.. "talents" I could make them weapons far beyond any other conventional weapon out there. Take good care of it now."

    And just like that, he vanished in a whisp of smoke. And then, Xeg started hearing sounds. The revving of engines, the sound of people, the tinkle of the bells on shop doors. People were arriving, and he was sure that he'd cause quite a scene, if he were to be discovered. Xegreny dashed down the streets, weaving through the people, trying to seem inconspicuous as possible. He was sure that only a few people recognized him. It wouldn't matter, he'd be gone, and nobody would believe them.
     
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    OOC: I write long posts because I write long posts...It's in my nature. I can't help it. Sorry, I had to convince my sister to leave me alone.

    BIC: Xardius smirked. "You got it!"

    Odin frowned as Tiamat began just coming to pieces as Xardius swung both Chomper and Shurunrai through blazing patterns. Tiamat roared once, then...quite simply, keeled over and died.

    "That was easy," Xardius said, sheathing Shurunrai after wiping it clean.

    "Send in the Death Machine!" Odin snapped. "I'm sick of this."

    Xardius turned to see a massive machine step out of the gate. Gears clinked, and Xardius frowned.

    "This doesn't look good," Xardius said, spinning Chomper in front of him. "Be prepared to...move."
     
  19. Xegreny Kingdom Keeper

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    OOC: Lol.

    Also: What happened to the whole "HP" and "You can only do 100 points per hit"? >:

    BIC: Xegreny finally reached the edge of the city. Ducking into the forest, he took a minute to catch his breath.

    "Oh, no no no!" Adumbral sneered, appearing from behind the trees. "You can't just leave town. What will the people think?"

    "I'm not here for your amusement, you freak." Xegreny growled, facing his Heartless.

    "Hmm. I guess your not." Adumbral said, shrugging. "But that doesn't mean I can't mess with you. Here. I brought you a friend."

    Adumbral stepped aside to reveal a child.. no, a teenager gagged and bound. He wore a combat outfit, and looked to be well.. not happy. Adumbral kicked him at Xeg and said, "Don't you recognize him? For shame. It's your little brother. Alex. Don't you remember?"

    OOC: Now. This was supposed to happen in Obsidian Sky. But that thread didn't go as I had planned. <_<
     
  20. Wing Traverse Town Homebody

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    "Well now...this is different. And here i thought only the UPA had mecha."


    Wing said jumping off the remains of the dragon and facing the machine head on.

    "just like old times huh Xardius...remember Spira?" Wing smirked and threw one blade at the Death Machine's legs.
     
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