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  1. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Not yet we're not!
     
    Nulix, Aug 5, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 5, 2009
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  2. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: I've just run a mental marathon rewriting the outline again... My head hurts.
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
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  3. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: And now its time for me to go edit it. Again. You and I are really just throwing the ball back and forth, Dk.
     
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
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  4. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: Yes, I know. Unfortunately for you, I've had people reading these... And telling them that they're all mine. People have begun to wonder whether or not I have multiple personalities.

    Anyway, they don't really like yours all that well. Honest. Even with me defending them. I didn't think they were all that bad myself, but I'm taking populace opinion, not my own. I worked with one of my lovely little critics to make this next one, and though they said it wasn't perfect, they said they'd probably read the book.

    Geez, I sound like a jerk. I really think you're a good writer Nulix! Really.
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
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  5. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Well Dk, I had to write something. I couldn't go with yours, where Geryl was forcing Bella to marry him... I'm not sure we had much of a plot there.
     
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
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  6. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: Yeah, that part sucked. There were parts I really liked out of your outline, and I used a lot of it to make this new one. You'll be able to recognize your story; it's just different.
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
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  7. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Well, I'm up to chapter three, and I already got a list of criticisms ready.
     
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
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  8. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: I will say that Xeno is pretty useless in the chapters. We could easily cut him out.

    Throw him at me. What are you thinking so far?
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
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  9. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: I'm a fast reader, Dk. I'll have my response for you tonight, some time.
     
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
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  10. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: OK. Then I'll just have to wait for the others to read it too, XD. Meanwhile, I'm going to go eat. Have fun in Rome.

    EDIT: OK, here's two of the new Brotherhood characters:

    Azull:
    [​IMG]
    Eclipse:
    [​IMG]
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 9, 2009
    #870

  11. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Neither of these Brotherhood characters are new.
     
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 9, 2009
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  12. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: New Brotherhood, not new characters. I was just playing with the avatar maker and made two of 'em. They look spiff...

    EDIT OOC: WOW. I just put all the threads into one word document and it's 5509 pages long!

    Anyway, here's the new Xardius from the upcoming stories with him:

    [​IMG]
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 13, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 13, 2009
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  13. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Thats pretty insane.
     
    Nulix, Aug 16, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 16, 2009
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  14. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:Now with it rolling on past midnight...it is now my birthday.
     
    Jaxed, Aug 17, 2009
    Jaxed, Aug 17, 2009
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  15. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Happy Birthday, Jaxed!

    How old are you now?
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 17, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 17, 2009
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  16. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    18 years old.
     
    Jaxed, Aug 17, 2009
    Jaxed, Aug 17, 2009
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  17. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: YOUR A MAN NOW. DON'T FORGET IT.

    ...

    ...

    *Cough*

    ...
     
    Nulix, Aug 18, 2009
    Nulix, Aug 18, 2009
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  18. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: Yeah, haha, how 'bout that? You can legally get sued now!
     
    DarKnight36, Aug 18, 2009
    DarKnight36, Aug 18, 2009
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  19. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Happy (belated) Birthday, Jaxed! I...actually feel like starting the new thread now...
     
    Pirateguywithapplepie, Aug 18, 2009
    Pirateguywithapplepie, Aug 18, 2009
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  20. hidden_light Traverse Town Homebody

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    OOC: For real? Its going to be over at CBR right?

    And happy belated b-day again Jaxed! ^^
     
    hidden_light, Aug 18, 2009
    hidden_light, Aug 18, 2009
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