The Ultimate Organization III

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  1. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: It's basically a menace from the past; Atomos was the main villain for Tera Roth and co. when they were first getting together, and they never really ended the battle with it. I'm just trying to incorporate ideas from before into the RP of now.

    So consider this the conclusion of something that started a long time ago. That's all. (I'll start popping out the chapters soon, hopefully).
     
  2. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Blah, I know you got an angle at things, Dk. I'm just... making sure everything runs well, all the plots work, through my harsh criticism. My post above was just an exaggeration...

    BIC: Niles and Alyt stood or sat with everyone...
     
  3. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: Yeah, no big deal...

    BIC: Wraith boosted the ship straight up towards the now gaping hole in the bottom of Atomos. Not slowing down, he dove in, driving straight up the hole.

    "The only way to defeat Atomos," Wraith said. "Is to destroy the core. Or so Xardius told me."

    Suddenly, a blast of crimson burst past them, and Xardius was seen, running vertically up Atomos' innards, slicing through things that got in his way.

    He pointed upwards, and ran faster.

    The walls of Atomos suddenly expanded into a massive room, in which the center stood a massive sphere. Wraith piloted the ship to a standstill by Xardius, as Xardius did some tricky thing with his hand and beckoned for the group to get out.
     
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    OOC: sorry for my absence.

    BIC: "Wing" was covered in the blood of Brotherhood Troops, after "killing" Wraith he had ended up in the dark Destiny Islands, a brotherhood controled world. He attacked the base, and left no one alive.

    "Their blood...It does not satisfy..." Xardius and Wraith suddenly appeared in front of him, and "Wing" snarled at them.

    "Leave me alone!" Seeing Wraith their his programming kicked in and he raised the keyblade to finish the job he had thought already finished. "He shall die, and you wil not interfere!" He put up a twilight cage to hold Xardius. "Wing" wasn't able to control it nearly as well as Wing could, but he was unique in that he gained the skill or ability of anyone who's blood he tatsed. He raied his free hand and shot a fire spell at Wraith...clearly using Xardius's powers.

    "This time you shall not surrvive!"




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    Wing stood in an open field, wind rushing through his hair. Crissilia sat nearby wondering what could possibly happen in such a peaceful place. Vecked's image still stood opposite Wing. His expression changed to sorrow and he pointed to the west. Wing levitated andflew off in the direction Vecked had pointed. He landed on a nearby hill top and his eyes grew. below him a town was burning, people were running around trying to help one another, but to Wing's horror a group of hooded individuals began to kill everyone they saw.

    "Who are they?" Wing asked as Vecked stepped up next to him. Vecked simply lowered his head and closed his eyes.

    Wing sent a twilight Wind spell into the town and knocked on of the hooded
    gang members out. He quickly landed in the town and using his wind powers, put out the fires. He then took off after the hooded ones. taking them out with his keyblades and saving the towns people. after they were safe, Wing picked up one of the hooded guys. he dropped the hood back and saw himself...every one of them.

    "What's going on...?" wing asked dropping the clone. Vecked was next to him once more, and dropped the Darkn fruit. Wing picked it up and as he did all of clones merged together, creating the Heartless that had grown in his heart when he ate the Darkfruit.

    "Welcome to the Darkness Wing. This time you willl not return alive."

    Wing was back on the platform and the wind rushed around him. twilight surged from his body, and he gritted his teeth.

    "Are you angry with me? It was you that killed those people and burned that town, don't you remember?"

    The heartless smirked and darkness began to pour from its body.

    "Wing, dont give in! Its a trap!"Crissilia shouted from behind Wing.

    "No, i have to defeat him!"

    Crissilia shouted at Wing again. "Wing, this test is to trick you. If you kill the monster, you become the monster!"

    Wing lowered the key blade. "You're saying if I defeat the darkness...I'll become the darkness?"

    Crissilia nodded.

    "But why then have we been fighting the Darkness left in my heart?"

    Crissilia shook her head. "I dont know..."

    THe heartless threw a spell at Wing, who quickly blocked.

    "The darkness in my heart must be defeated, but darkness is needed in the universe. This test is to show me that I kill those responsible for Darkness, i'll only take thir place in the Universe...I'll be no different then the "Wing" running around in the Dark Universe."

    The Hearless vanished and Vcked nodded before bowing and dissapearing.
    Crissilia sighed. "If thats true, then what will you do about the Brotherhood, just let them be and take over?"

    Wing shook his head. "Of course not. The Test also showed me a way around becoming the Darkness I defeat...If I go after someone evil with anger in my heart, I'll become them. If i go after them with perpose and reason...then i can justify doing the right thing. the hooded figures wouldn't have been me in that village if i had gone in tackfully...instead of letting my emotions get in the way. "

    Crissllia smiled softly. "Did you learn anything else?"

    Wing nodded. "One more thing. There are people in the Darkness that must be there...You dont have to be evil to be darkness...like Vecked. When this is all over, Vecked will be next in line to be the Guardian of Darkness."

    Wing slowly walked to the edge of the platform and jumped down, Leaving crissillia to shake her head with a smile. "Xardius...you and the others hold out a little longer..." She then followed wing and jumped, landing on the next platform. The stain glass was of Wing and Xaron standing opposite as if looking in a mirror. Their right hands raised as if to touch on another, their left hands holding the Oathkeepers, one of light the other of regular.

    "The final stage..." Wing said in a whisper.
     
  5. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    "I'm...kinda confused," Xane said. "Where did this thing come from?"
     
  6. DarKnight36 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OOC: We'll say the first part happened in the past since it would be a paradox for the characters to be in two places at once, XD. Great post Wing!

    BIC: Wraith dodged the fireball as Xardius very nearly erupted in power, shattering the twilight cage.

    Xardius flipped up flames of his own, ready to pound this dark being to the dirt, but suddenly hesitated.

    "Something's...wrong..." Xardius muttered. "We have to go."

    "What?" Wraith asked, picking himself out of the dirt.

    "The Brotherhoood..." Xardius said, opening a portal. "This is to my ship. Let's go!"

    Wraith and Xardius dove through the portal...

    OOC: So that was a while ago. They then drove the ship to Atomos. I left it so "Wing" can follow them if he wants to, since Xardius opened a portal (traceable), and said Brotherhood.

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    Tera Roth hesitated as he began to exit the ship. "It's a Heartless with an even more numerous number of hearts inside it than I have. Unlike myself who retained conscious form, however, Atomos simply engorged itself on other Heartless becoming the ultimate lifeform..."

    He shrugged. "Now it's so big the only food it even notices are world's hearts..."
     
  7. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: That makes sense....So...

    BIC: "Can it only detect people with hearts?" Xane asked.
     
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    "Think of it like a giant compared to a dead ant, and you can consider how much Atomos will notice us within its gut," Tera Roth said. "I'm like a tiny itch, since I'm a Heartless. Xardius...will probably be like a small thorn. It might not notice you, but it will probably notice us."

    He ran out of the ship. "Xardius! What's next?"

    "The core," Xardius muttered, pointing. "This is apparently what Scourge wanted the Virus for."

    Tera Roth looked and shook his head.

    Xardius explained. "Atomos has been bolstered with viral cells, like some other Heartless exposed to the Virus. It's gotten stronger..."

    He pulled out Chomper, and blazed it with energy, swinging at the core that stood in the middle of the room. The energy exploded nearly three meters away, exposing a web-like shield.

    "And smarter," Xardius said. "That won't be easy to bust through..."
     
  9. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    "Since it can't detect me, let me try and take out the core," Xane said.
     
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    "Yes, but first we have to get through the shield," Xardius muttered. "Let me try this...if it works, Xane, jump through immediately and kill this thing got it?"

    OOC: Of course it's going to work.

    BIC: With a roar, Xardius ran forward, and leaped, hitting the shield with Chomper. With a screech, sparks flew everywhere as Xardius' power blasted out of him in pulses of power that dented the areas around him...including the shield. The adverse side effect was that it knocked everyone to the ground. Suddenly, the shield split in twain, and Xardius stepped in between, holding out both arms as the shield tried to heal itself. Focusing his power into his hands, he blasted the pieces back, though blood from his hands still dripped onto the ground.

    "Now Xane!" he yelled.
     
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    Xane quickly leaped up and punched the center of the shield, driving his fist into the core.
     
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    Atomos' scream lifted Tera Roth off his feet with sheer intensity as Xardius flipped around, grabbed Xane, and slipped from the shield with him as the core exploded.

    The shield contained the blast, then collapsed. Xardius looked up to see light emanating from another hole leading upwards.

    "He's going to blow it all!" Xardius yelled.

    Tera Roth's eyes widened. "Wait, you mean he's going to channel all his energy into one super-nuclear blast that will obliterate everything in a path from here to the world below?"

    "Surprisingly accurate," Xardius grunted. "Get out of here. I'll stop it."
     
  13. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    "Sir, you might wanna take a look at this," One agent said, taping Lexx on the shoulder. The agent escorted Lexx to a screen. It was some sort of creature going crazy. "What the hell is that thing?" Lexx asked. "Atomos, Sir. You remember?" The agent asked. Lexx shrugged, before watching some more.

    "This thing is perfect... um, have the boys in the lab write me up a script," Lexx said, "Say that this is believed to be one of the Brotherhood's weapons, they have several others it is believed, for the safety of the worlds: And then I say my plan."

    "Yes sir," The agent replied, writing Lexx's order down on a piece of paper. "By the way, how's Sumer doing?" The agent asked. "Oh," Lexx started, "Its air taking. The desert region is still under works, I want like... a middle eastern slash Greek flare to the whole western area and the crew I'm with is having some safety troubles... two weeks, it'll be done, though."
     
  14. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    "You're going to take this thing out by yourself?" Mellodia asked.

    "It'll be handled. Let's just try and get out of here," Venture replied.

    Xane pulled his arm out of the core, before the shield closed, and started to exit Atomos with the others.
     
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    Wraith ran onto the ship, followed by everyone, and zoomed back down through the hole.

    Xardius stepped underneath the glowing hole, and raised his sword...
     
  16. Pirateguywithapplepie Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Is anyone going to post? I've got nothing yet...
     
  17. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC: Yeah, me neither...
     
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    OOC: Darknight, you still online?

    BIC: Allan Acteon sat, watching the commotion at the sight of Atomos.
     
  19. Nulix Twilight Town Denizen

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    Ooc: ..........
     
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    OOC: So I'll just post this...

    BIC: Atomos exploded and jetted its guts downwards in a massive spiral of energy that hit Xardius at nearly the speed of sound. Within an instant, Atomos was transformed completely into a beam of energy the size of Kingdom Hearts and was smashing into Xardius.

    The crystals glowed on his waist as the energy was absorbed. Xardius focused it into his sword, to the point of Chomper shattering, then swung.

    All the Brotherhood forces died instantly in a flash of fire, and then...there was nothing as Xardius fell towards the planet below, unconscious from sheer power usage.
     
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